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Mark Bisone's avatar

This is a marvel of short fiction. I love the unvarnished bleakness of the setup, the thudding blunt edge of Chris' death and the dark nights of the soul to follow. I'm a fan of epistolary horror as a form in general, and this is a great example of how to tell a larger story with maximum efficiency.

And then the ending! You had me thinking all along: what about disruptive technologies? Active defense systems? Rooted and repurposed devices? P2P networks? Is this motherfucker so black-pilled he hasn't thought of this shit? Needless to say, I was pleasantly surprised.

Thanks for this, Winston. I think you will make an excellent counter-propagandist, in the strange war to come.

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Winston Smith's avatar

Any one want to have a guess as to why I used December 23, 2047 as the diary entry date?

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